The New Deal

you guys clearly show a lot of proficiency in almost all but one category. the screens are great.

the concept is OK? a filipino crime group.. but there isnt anything really filipino about yall. no cultural influence on the faction but that can be corrected.

the characters need to all be fixed, i can tell y’all were either DMers who want to switch to RP, or y’all just don’t wanna transfer your characters into new ones, but to be accepted and be taken seriously , new characters need to be made in order to portray your faction correctly.

screens are great, just take it easy on the stroke (personal opinion). small tip, just try and keep your text on the left hand side, it is aesthetically more pleasing and easier to grasp the screen.

portrayal is important, going back to my earlier point, there are guys like “nasir rich” who are portraying a filipino american, when those aren’t filipino names. neither is symere rose. you guys are structured like a Italian LCN group and have literally the EXACT same ritual as them, which needs to change. you aren’t the italian mafia, you aren’t moretti. giving someone a gun in a public park, not even behind bushes , or seated? next to the police station?

and please shorten that wiki page. no one is reading that.

for help with your faction, please dm me and i will make sure you’re all fixed and ready to be accepted. I am Playboy Osama in the faction hub server.