The Born Devils.

bids11
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The Born Devils. Oct 19, 2023 20:16:38 GMT -5 Members Only likes this

Post by bids11 on Oct 19, 2023 20:16:38 GMT -5

Oct 19, 2023 1:19:09 GMT -5 nort said:

Screens are filler / have no real story

I'm happy to take the constructive criticism, we're definitely working on our screens and of course they are nowhere near as good as yours, but we're getting better do you have any tips? nort

nort
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The Born Devils. Oct 19, 2023 20:46:58 GMT -5 ebsofunny and Members Only like this

Post by nort on Oct 19, 2023 20:46:58 GMT -5

Oct 19, 2023 20:16:38 GMT -5 bids11 said:

Oct 19, 2023 1:19:09 GMT -5 nort said:

Screens are filler / have no real story

I'm happy to take the constructive criticism, we're definitely working on our screens and of course they are nowhere near as good as yours, but we're getting better do you have any tips? nort

Add a story, character personalitys and development and a plot to follow.

walioutloud
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The Born Devils. Oct 20, 2023 20:42:37 GMT -5 ebsofunny likes this

Post by walioutloud on Oct 20, 2023 20:42:37 GMT -5

Oct 19, 2023 20:46:58 GMT -5 nort said:

Oct 19, 2023 20:16:38 GMT -5 bids11 said:

I'm happy to take the constructive criticism, we're definitely working on our screens and of course they are nowhere near as good as yours, but we're getting better do you have any tips? nort

Add a story, character personalitys and development and a plot to follow.

More than 3 - 5 screens needed to make a screen story

gloryboyefan Newbie Posts: 16	The Born Devils. Oct 21, 2023 23:39:01 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by gloryboyefan on Oct 21, 2023 23:39:01 GMT -5 Han has a sit down talk with someone..

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